I'm it,
dashing around,
people shy and flee to get away.
Then I spot you,
tarying.
I home in,
moving towards you,
fast.
You don't flinch,
lure me in.
I reach out for you,
a touch,
all I need.
A kick,
I'm down,
and you run off into the crowd.
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I fianlly got another submission in, yay me.
Also it came out different than I was originally planning (when does anything?), but I like the end result; however due to the changes the two other endings I had planned for it didn't work so I'll have to stick with the original ending idea. Mabey I could write it agian in two different styles to fit the other endings in? |
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