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Death Song of the Neutral by ~Iralie:iconIralie:

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Suicide Song of the Neutral

I wanted someone to Love
I wanted someone to Hate

I wanted some to kill
And someone to aid.

I wanted someone to rip apart with my bare hands
Use their blood to drench my arms

I wanted someone to protect
To shield from any bad fate

All of these are for those with opinions
Actions and words
Are what gets you want you want
Not kindness and the hope that nothing goes wrong

My life was spent
Takeing kindness to all
Not doing that which moves you on

Everyone who won
And those that lost too
Everyone famous
In any circle at all
All had opinions

And now all I want is someone to stand by at a time of fate
Be it an enemy
Or someone I thinks great
©2005-2009 ~Iralie
:iconiralie:

Author's Comments

A litle thing I came up with on the way home from 6th form while comtemplating how my life was going.

Also if anyone can come up with a word t orepalce "aid" i nthe second stanza I'd be much obliged if you could mention it to me.

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~repta Jan 14, 2005, 6:35:50 AM
the only thing i could come up with was "And someone's life to fill" but im not sure if it goes with the meaning (or what i made of it anyway). Oh and great poem ! :D
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~Iralie Jan 15, 2005, 7:14:23 PM
I'm not too sure on how it would fit either. THanks for the input though, and especailly the fav. :-)
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~TheThirdHelix Sep 5, 2006, 4:16:50 PM
Awesome, man. And I know it's old. I only recently bothered doing anything on here other than use dA for imagehosting (Which seems to not work well).

And thanks to this piece, I now have a lot of inspiration, enough to finish a song I've been writing on and off for weeks.

--
--Stitch: Born only for the benefit of those with flash photography
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~Iralie Sep 10, 2006, 11:09:35 AM
Yay, someone commented on my stuff.

Gladit inspired you, and all that stuff.
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